literature

my heart whispers your name

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i am listening to sad songs
(the acoustic guitar makes my heart weep)
and i find myself walking down
abandoned corridors, everyone has deserted for warm
rooms and philisophical discussions
and i catch myself whispering your name
i can't stop whispering your name
this gut wrenching pain swims in my heart
never disappearing, never leaving
and i am always scared to see you
(how i want to see you always)
and i am full of noise and clutter
and people are yelling and disturbing
my quiet heartache
girls in tight pants and now that i have
had my heart broken
can i have my second chance?
I wrote this one a while ago, last semester, around mid-december... it's about
an old boyfriend... the same one written about in nearly all the garbage I write.
He's beautiful. God I am sappy.


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silverdoves's avatar
I think this poem is amazing, and defintely could be felt by yours truly. (been there) and I loved the little rhyme at the end, too. I love the image that was portrayed. I saw a girl in a hallway (the corridors, part, I imagine is what did that) and she's stuck in her memories and can't stop thinking about the person she lost. It's like she's escaped into another world to remember, but there are so many things trying to mess that up --

"and i am full of noise and clutter
and people are yelling and disturbing
my quiet heartache"

and I just love the whole feel and it's like that emotion is just too strong to do anything and you think nothing can make you better, but you realize that exactly what would make you better is to have back what you lost -- "can i have my second chance?" :clap: love it. :+favlove:

psh on my philosophies, lol. :)